tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5634545562551332886.post8942826179586691662..comments2024-03-25T15:47:31.620-07:00Comments on Karen Singer's Stories and Adventures: An Excellent QuestionKaren Singerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00196275413933058132noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5634545562551332886.post-46126625333992689062010-08-16T10:09:27.122-07:002010-08-16T10:09:27.122-07:00Is it too preposterous to suggest letting others h...Is it too preposterous to suggest letting others help with the writing? I would be willing to write a chapter but would not be at all upset if you told me to take a hike.<br />KammiKammihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02377300397607756095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5634545562551332886.post-12177720066098002402010-08-11T07:50:16.118-07:002010-08-11T07:50:16.118-07:00this sissy just loves your story, and has been rea...this sissy just loves your story, and has been reading it since you started it, keep up the good work, and hopefully "the sissy's" humiliation is increased !! ~~ pansypansy_Faggottehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17865011128059567685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5634545562551332886.post-10623131488923641022010-08-11T07:24:19.812-07:002010-08-11T07:24:19.812-07:00I can see how you are getting writers block becaus...I can see how you are getting writers block because your story is so detailed. It has been a great story but before you burn yourself out, why don't you just shorten it up with one part chapters. We get the idea of what is going on in his life. Sometimes the reader would like to full in their own details. There are getting to be too many sub stories going on in this story that is slowing it down. For example, I thought he was supposed to be getting divorced on the day you are posting now. Isn't he going to go to court and see his soon-to-be ex-wife? How is she going to respond to him looking the way he does? For a story with so much back story now, some of the loose ends need to start getting wrapped up. Reading about one day over the course of three weeks is too long. Regardless, thanks for a writing it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5634545562551332886.post-84564629390935479312010-08-11T07:13:07.025-07:002010-08-11T07:13:07.025-07:00Dear Sissy Karen,
You have worked so hard on this...Dear Sissy Karen,<br /><br />You have worked so hard on this story "The Bet" It is fine writing and good writing takes time. Thank you for your efforts. Anyone who wants to see the first of the story can go back to August 5, 2009 and start from there. I did. I did not discover your blog until July 2010.<br /><br />Cissy WilliamsBP Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15878350385343610731noreply@blogger.com